2024年6月16日发(作者：)

高考英语读后续写

动作描写手法讲解

一、具体替代笼统

【技法示例】

1.她看了一眼。

She glanced at him.

升级：She shot her a meaningful look.她向他意味深长地看了一眼。

2.贝利紧盯着他。

Belli looked at him closely.

升级：Belli’s diamond eyes locked on to her.贝利钻石般的眼睛紧盯着她。

3.我把他的名字忘记了。

I forgot his name.

升级：His name had completely slipped from my memory.他的名字，我竟忘得一干二净。

4.小男孩对他妈妈说对不起。

The little boy said sorry to his mother.

The little boy hung his head and mumbled an apology to his mother.小男孩垂着头，

咕哝着向他母亲道歉。

【常见动词升级示例】

“说”：低语whisper / mumble / murmur，结巴：stutter，宣布announce / declare，保

证promise / assure，建议propose / suggest，喊叫：cry out / shout / scream / yell / exclaim

/ howl（因疼痛、愤怒、开心等）大声叫喊，roar咆哮，吼叫，sign叹息 boast 自夸

“看”：catch a glance of / cast a glimpse of / stare at / gaze at / glare at / peep

at / raise one’s eyes

walk - tiptoe 蹑手蹑脚地走，slip, steal into，wind one’s way;

“抓”：seize / grasp / grab / clutch / take hold of / catch hold of / hold on to

“跑”：rush/dash/race猛冲, 急速移动；rise to one’s feet站起来；spring / jump to

one’s feet 一跃而起, 跳起；slide / slip into溜进；flee away 逃跑

“哭”：weep, sob (啜泣)

“吃”：bite (咬) chew（咀嚼) swallow (吞下)

【技法体验】

felt her heart race.玛丽感到她的心跳加速。

2.A great silence surrounded them.周围一片寂静。

stormed out and slammed the door shut.他怒气冲冲地跑了出去，把门重重地关上。

choked and her eyes brimmed with tears.她喉咙哽咽，眼里满是泪水。

slammed his foot on the gas and shot up onto the grass and straight toward

the bottom of the 在汽油上用力踩了一下，然后飞快的踏上草坪直直地朝树底下走

去。

pulses beat fast, and the blood warmed and relaxed every inch of her body.

她的心跳加快，热血温暖了身体的每个部位，使她感觉到身心完全地放松了

二、一帧变三帧 （分解---合并---美化）

Step1分解动作Divide the action into several steps；

Step2合并动作Combine a chain of actions together；

Step3美化动作Modify and beautify the action；

【示例】

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jumped off the bus, dashed into the shop, and yelled at the crowd to leave.

他跳下公共汽车，冲进商店，大喊大叫让人群离开。

reached deep into his pocket, pulled out a handful of change, and held it up

to the farmer.他在兜里掏了半天，掏出一把零钱，递给那个农民。

sprang to his feet, grabbed the bag, and rushed out of the living room.他一

跃而起，抓起书包，冲出起居室。

遇到狼上车的动作：

[分解]jump off the bicycle — dash into the back seat of the car — slam the door

— lean against the seat

[合成美化]Mac jumped off the bicycle, dashed into the back seat of the car and slammed

the door heavily, leaning against the seat, breathless.

【技法示例】

1.她抱住女儿。

She hugged her daughter.

[分解]dash forward --- knee down --- gather

[合并]She dashed forward, knelt down and gathered her daughter into her arms.

[美化]With a giant smile on her face, she dashed forward, knelt down and gathered

her daughter into her arms tightly.

2.她去捉蝴蝶。

She went to catch the butterfly.

[分解]creep爬, bend弯腰, cup（使成杯型）

[合并]She crept along the path, bent over and cupped her hands around the butterfly.

[美化]She crept along the path, bent over swiftly and cupped her hands around the

butterfly gently.她蹑手蹑脚地走着小路，迅速弯下腰，轻轻地绕着蝴蝶。

3.朝狼扔石块。

[分解]Pick up --- aim at --- throw

[合并]Having picked up a stone, he aimed at the wolf and threw it to the wolf.

[美化]Having picked up a stone firmly, he aimed at the fierce wolf carefully and threw

it straight to the wolf with all his strength.

4.我早上匆忙去上学。

[分解]Put on my coat --- grabbed my schoolbag --- rushed to school

[合并]I put on my coat, grabbed my schoolbag and rushed to the school.

[美化]Putting on my coat hurriedly, I grabbed my schoolbag and rushed to the school

like an arrow.

5.这个歌手在台上唱歌。

[分解]Glanced at the audience --- took a deep breath --- began to sing

[合并]The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.

[美化]Anxiously glancing at the audience, the singer took a deep breath and began

to sing with emotion.

【美化手段】

+ 情感名词的搭配：

with delight / excitement / pleasure/ happiness / joy / satisfaction / anger / rage

/ patience / fear / terror / embarrassment / pride / caution / care / patience / certainty

+身体部位：

with its hungry red eyes / its sharp teeth / her shaky hand / her pale lips…

+名词：

in surprise / amazement / shock / sorrow伤心

in a high / low / sweet / loud / soft / weak voice 用..的嗓音

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In a tone of surprise / curiosity / impatience / regret /command命令 用...的语

气

4.副词 suddenly / immediately / instantly / rapidly / firmly / slowly / angrily /

happily / excitedly

【示例】

murmured, sprang up and dashed to the center of an open area, waving her yellow

blouse desperately and yelling at the helicopter with excitement.

s came across pirates on an island.

--- A few days later, a passing ship came into view at some were thrilled

and dashed to the shore, waving our arms in the air with unately, it

was a pirate ship.“Quick, back to the hut”.I yelled in spang to our feet and

it was too late, we were spotted by the pirates.

【用法体验】

1.这个天真的被妈妈抱着的女孩心疯狂地跳动着，兴奋地尖叫着，打开她一直期待着的精致

的礼盒。

With her heart beating wildly, the innocent girl, held by her mom and screaming with

excitement, unwrapped her delicate gift box which she had been looking forward to without

any hesitation.

2.我们车上的每个人都在一旁看着，疯狂地笑着。Ryan挣扎着站起来，掸了掸夹克上的灰尘，

走到一个空座位前。

Every one of us on the bus looked on and laughed crazily, Ryan struggled to his feet,

dusted the jacket and made his way to an empty seat.

felt cold.

--- She pulled her collar up, tightened her scarf, stuck her hands deep into her

pockets and turned her face away from the biting wind.

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