2024年2月10日发(作者：三星a3000)
现象阐释型作文
现象阐释型作文要求考生对某一现象进行解释说明，分析其原因并加以评论。
其基本结构为：首先描述现象并说明其现状；然后分析产生该现象的原因或相关因素；最后提出建议或总结自己的观点。具体来说
1. 说明段：
（1） 开门见山，总述现象，常用句型：
A. Nowadays, there exists a social/economic/environmental phenomenon, which has aroused great
concern among people around us.
B. 总体现象has increasingly become a common concern of the public.
C. 总体现象 is commonly accepted by the people from all walks of life.
(2) 举例或利用调查内容说明这一现象的具体表现，常用句型：According to a survey, ….
(3) 承上启下，引出原因/因素/影响, 过渡到下文，常用句型：
A. There are a couple of reasons booming this phenomenon/problem.
B. This phenomenon/problem has a great on ….影响的主要对象
2. 说明段：阐述原因
（1） 列出原因一/因素一/影响一，常用词汇：Firstly/Above all/First of all/
（2） 列出原因二/因素二/影响二，常用词汇：Secondly/What’s more/Furthermore
（3） 列出原因三/因素三/影响三，常用词汇：Besides/Finally
（4） 总结以上原因或因素导致的结果或该现象的最终影响，常用词汇：As a result,
/Therefore,/Consequently
3. 议论段：表明自己的观点或看法
（1） 我对此现象的思考或看法，常用句型：
A. As far as I am concerned,…
B. As to me,…
C. In my opinion,…
(2) 进一步说明自己的看法或陈述理由
（3） 总结全文，常用句型：Based on the above discussion, I can draw the conclusion
that…/I an conclude that…./it can be safely concluded that….
Sample.
Cards
1. 现代城市持卡的人越来越多。
2. 原因在于……
3. “我”的看法
Nowadays, holding cards has become a common phenomenon. According to a
survey, over 80% of people in big cities hold various kinds of cards issued by banks,
restaurants, supermarkets, etc. There are a number of reasons accounting for it.
First of all, it is convenient to consumers by cards. What’s more, it is safer to carry
cards than cash. For example, if one/s cards are lost, the owner needn’t worry too much
because no one else can get money out without knowing the password. In addition,
cards can give car holders certain privileges or discount in service. Therefore, holding
cards, especially among the youth, becomes fashionable recently.
As for me, cards have bright future. With the development of science and
technology, cards will become much safer and easier to use. From the above discussion,
it can be safely concluded that more and more people will use cards.
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