2023年12月9日发(作者：诺基亚6267)

Structure 结构

 Introduction 总起段

 Body 主体段

 Conclusion 总结段

Introduction 总起段

 Background 背景

 Controversy (2 different / opposite ideas) 争议

 Statement 观点

 Transition 过渡

Background 背景

 Being a controversial issue, the great popularity of automobile has aroused a great deal of

attention in society during the past decades.

 Nowadays, the issue on the great popularity of automobile is highly debatable, and ideas

vary from person to person.

Controversy 争议

 Some people think that it is good, other people think that it is bad.

 Some people think that the automobile has improved modern life. Others think that the

automobile has caused serious problems.

 Some would claim daily life has been upgraded due to automobile, while some others

may suggest that severe problems are the results (which are) brought by automobile.

 Some would claim daily life has been upgraded due to automobile, while the idea that

severe problems are the results brought by automobile is still held by some others.

 Think → claim / suggest / believe / advocate / maintain / argue / suppose

 Good → beneficial / profitable / helpful / sound / decent

 Bad → harmful / detrimental / hazardous

 Advantage → merit / virtue / benefit / profit / pro

 Disadvantage → demerit / drawback / flaw / shortcoming / con / cost

Statement 观点

 简洁明了 concrete & concise

 As for me, I side with the former / latter.

 As far as I am concerned, I believe automobile is indispensable in everyday life.

 In my view, it is much better to have everyday life without automobile.

Transition 过渡

 In the following paragraphs, I would present some reasons.

 A few explanations / examples would be presented as follows.

 Thus essential and persuasive evidences would be provided in the subsequent paragraphs

to verify my perspective.

Body 主体段

 To begin with / Firstly / First and foremost

 Secondly / In addition / Moreover

 In the third place / Furthermore / Last but not least

Conclusion 总结段

 Statement 观点 rewrite, not copy

 All in all / To conclude / In conclusion / In general / To sum up

 When all the above-mentioned factors are taken into consideration, a conclusion could be

drawn that …

 From my point of view, it is advisable to take advantage of automobile while eliminate its

drawbacks.

 From where I stand, automobile can not be an essential factor in pursuing a perfect life.

方便高效 convenient & efficient

 To begin with, it is convenient and efficient to travel by automobile.

 For example, from downtown to suburb, by car, it costs a few hours.

 Otherwise, by bicycle or on foot, nearly one day is needed.

 Anywhere around the city could be reached within one day.

 It is the automobile that brings about urbanization.

丰富生活 enrich lifestyle

 In addition, lifestyle can be enriched via automobile.

 With automobile, lifestyle could be more colorful and entertaining and life radius may be

enlarged.

 Traveling widens horizon and visualizes what is learnt in books.

 Besides, shopping enables one to relieve the pressure of work and study.

 Only by his own car can one go anywhere at any time.

推动相关产业 boost related industries

 Furthermore, automobile boosts related industries.

 Now it is possible to develop tourism and logistics.

 Fast speed saves time, and long distance is no longer a barrier to the tourist attractions far

away.

 Besides, fresh fruit and vegetable could be delivered across the nation within a few days,

and the express industry may be booming.

让步段

 Although automobile may sometimes seem to have some demerits, such as leading to

depletion of fuel resources worldwide, air pollution and traffic jam and accidents, its

overall profits far outweigh its drawbacks.

 Despite the fact that there are still some flaws existing, such as leading to depletion of

fuel resources worldwide, air pollution and traffic jam and accidents, automobile is

profitable on the whole.

交通阻塞和事故 traffic jam and accidents

 Furthermore, traffic jam and accidents are problems brought by automobiles.

 With the ever-increasing number of cars, citizens suffer traffic jam greatly. In rush hour,

by car, it usually costs 30 minutes to cover the distance of five minutes’ walk.

 Moreover, traffic accidents are frequently the headlines of newspaper. It is not

uncommon that traffic accidents disable some drivers and pedestrians, and even deprive

them of their lives.

耗尽石油资源 deplete fuel resources worldwide

 To begin with, fuel resources worldwide are depleted due to automobile.

 It is estimated that the great amount of cars consume most fuel, and the proportion keeps

expanding.

 Human beings are in the crisis of oil shortage, which may pose a potential threat to the

world peace, and trigger conflict or even war.

空气污染 air pollution

 In addition, air pollution results from automobile.

 Global warming is an international issue, and the large number of carbon dioxide (which

is) emitted from cars accelerates global warming.

 Besides, sulfur dioxide contributes to worsening of air quality, and therefore fresh air is

no longer available. And acid rain stemming from sulfur dioxide destroys plants in the

field.

让步段

 Although automobile may sometimes seem to have some merits, such as convenience and

efficiency, enriching lifestyle, and boosting related industries, its overall drawbacks far

outweigh its profits.

 Despite the fact that there are still some merits existing, such as being convenient and

efficient, enriching lifestyle, and boosting related industries, automobile is detrimental on

the whole.

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