2024年4月19日发(作者：二手单反相机)

Make a Good Impression

Everyone wants to get the friendship and belief of others, however, some

people often cannot do as they hoped. The reason why they didn't obtain the

friendship and belief is that they didn't make a good impression. Consequently,

making a good impression is important to everyone of us, but how to make a

good impression is suspicious to many people. There are some tips about how

to make a good impression.

First of all, you should be friendly to others. If you want to make more

friends, you should always be ready to help the people who are in trouble, from

which you can make a good impression such as friendly and believable. Next,

you had better often smile to others, by which you can let others know you are

a optimistic person. Last but not least, you must be honest to others, otherwise,

more and more people will never trust you, so you should do as good as your

word. In addition to all the above, you should also be hardworking or

hard-studying and natural to others and so on, these good characters can make

you get more good impressions.

I believe you will be popular to others with many good impressions if you do

as these tips. In fact, making a good impression depends on many factors. We

should do more things to improve our accomplishment. In my opinion, only

often care about and help others can we get others' respect and

appreciate. Give your heart to others, you will make a good impression and

obtain friendship and belief.

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第1段

1.1

Everyone wants to get the friendship and belief of others, however, some people

often cannot do as they hoped.

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[学习提示] 易混词汇:

belief

, faith, confidence, conviction, credit, trust 都有“相信，信

任”之意。

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people

表示“人，民族”。查看与

person

的区别。

[批改提示]

often

的近义表达有

frequently

。

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want

的近义表达有

intend

，

tend

，

lack

，

need

。

1.2

The reason why they didn't obtain the friendship and belief is that they didn't

make a good impression.

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[搭配统计] 动名搭配

impression

在教材中出现过 2416 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: idea, concept, conception, thought, notion,

impression

均有

“思想，观点，观念”之意。

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reason

表示“原因，理由”。注意与

cause

的区别。详情点击

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obtain

常指通过努力获得,注意与

get

区别。详情点击

[高分句型]

the reason why

意为：...的原因是...，属于四六级经典高分句型。

1.3

Consequently, making a good impression is important to everyone of us, but

how to make a good impression is suspicious to many people.

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[语法检查] 建议把

everyone of

改成

every one of

(Separate everyone)

[低频警示]

suspicious to many people

在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语

[学习提示] 易混词汇: accordingly,

consequently

, hence, so, therefore, thus 均有

“因此，所以”之意。

[高分词汇]

important

的近义表达有

crucial

/

essential

。

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suspicious

意思为“可疑的”注意与

doubtful

区别。详情点击

1.4

There are some tips about how to make a good impression.

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[学习提示] 易混词汇: gift, present, souvenir,

tip

都有“礼物，赠品”之意。

第2段

2.1

First of all, you should be friendly to others.

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[学习提示] 易混词汇:

friendly

, kind, cordial 均含“友好的，亲切的”之意。

2.2

If you want to make more friends, you should always be ready to help the

people who are in trouble, from which you can make a good impression such as

friendly and believable.

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friend

在教材中出现过 1965 次

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people

在教材中出现过 4377 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇:

friend

, mate, acquaintance, pal 都有“朋友”之意。

[批改提示] 注意

be about to do sth

与

be ready to do sth

区别。

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help

近义表达有

support/ assist/ aid

2.3

Next, you had better often smile to others, by which you can let others know you

are a optimistic person.

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[语法检查] 请检查

a optimistic

(Wrong article)

[学习提示] 易混词汇:

optimistic

, hopeful 均可表示“充满希望的，乐观的”之意。

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know

近义表达有

cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

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person

表示“人”。注意与

people

的区别。详情点击

2.4

Last but not least, you must be honest to others, otherwise, more and more

people will never trust you, so you should do as good as your word.

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do...word

在教材中出现过 84 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: frank, open, plain, blunt,

honest

, sincere, straightforward 都

有“坦率，诚实”之意。

[批改提示] 注意

must

和

have to

的区别。

[高分表达] 高分词组，

as...as

意为“和...一样地...”,第一个as为副词，表“一样地”， 而第二

个as则为连接词，表“和，与”之意。

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trust

表示“相信”。注意与

trust in

的区别。详情点击

2.5

In addition to all the above, you should also be hardworking or hard-studying

and natural to others and so on, these good characters can make you get more

good impressions.

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[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！

[形容词错误] 表达不规范，建议将

more good

改为

better

。

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impression

在教材中出现过 887 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: alphabet, letter,

character

, script 均有“字母”之意。

[批改提示] 注意

characters

和

character

区别。

第3段

3.1

I believe you will be popular to others with many good impressions if you do as

these tips.

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[学习提示] 易混词汇:

believe

, trust, confide, rely 均含有“相信，信任”之意。

3.2

In fact, making a good impression depends on many factors.

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[学习提示] 易混词汇:

depend

, rely 后跟on(upon)，均有“依赖，依靠”之意。

[批改提示]

in fact

的同义表达有

in reality

。

3.3

We should do more things to improve our accomplishment.

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[学习提示] 易混词汇:

improve

, better, perfect, refine 均有“改进，改善”之意。

3.4

In my opinion, only often care about and help others can we get others' respect

and appreciate.

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[学习提示] 易混词汇:

appreciate

, enjoy 均含“欣赏”之意。

3.5

Give your heart to others, you will make a good impression and obtain

friendship and belief.

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[搭配统计] 动名搭配

heart

在教材中出现过 253 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇:

give

, accord, award, confer，grant, endow, present, bestow 均

含有“给予，赠给”之意。