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雅思大作文Report/Discussion类题型范文和结构详解
EXAMPLE:
In most parts of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming
rate.
Discuss about the main traffic problems, their causes and possible
solutions.
开头段写法:It seems to be an inevitable/irresistible trend/phenomenon that
with/despite the accelerating progress of transport industry, there has been a
dramatic increase in the traffic volume both in cities and on the motorway
everywhere.
Option 1: In the following essay, I will state those contributing factors involved
in this issue and relevant possible/potential measures.
Option 2: The following essay is designed to examine those contributing
factors involved in this issue and propose relevant possible/potential measures.
Body paragraph 1写法(分析产生题目中所提到的问题的原因:
causes/reasons/contributing factors):
(In my opinion,) From my point of view, /From my perspective, a possible
cause of this
problem is that the infrastructure construction has not been effective or
efficient.
(报告类分析原因的部分可以写成因果论证的结构)
原因一:That is to say, in spite of the fact that the growth of various transport
facilities is rapid, it still cannot meet/encounter the increasing needs of people.
原因二:Furthermore, /Another striking factor is that people tend to abuse their
private cars rather than take public transports, which could probably cause/result
in an excessive number of vehicles on the road.
原因三:Finally, individuals have to be responsible for this problem. As a matter
of fact, a certain number of them are lacking in consciousness and awareness for
the orderly traffic situation. This could be particularly true when people may drive
after drinking alcohol, which apparently cause an increasing number of traffic
accidents.
Body paragraph 2写法(分析如何针对上述问题提出解决方案:solutions):
Fortunately, we have been well informed about how to reverse this trend.
解决方案一:To be explicit, the utmost measure is (for sb to do sth) for the
government to
put more financial resources to/inject more funds into the construction and
maintenance of infrastructure facilities such as road systems, the metro ones,
elevated ways and superhighway. 解决方案二:Another valid policy could be to
levy/impose heavy tax on luxurious products especially private cars so as to
encourage people to (choose) opt/select the public transport services instead of
private cars.
解决方案三:Furthermore, it is also a responsibility/duty of the government to
publicize the importance of obeying traffic regulations through some forms of
educational programs.
结论段写法(restate what you have mentioned above):
In conclusion, it is vital to understand that …_ 主题问题 various traffic
problems are/is primarily/principally caused by 总结主要原因 the
lack/insufficiency of infrastructure construction and the abuse of private cars.
Accordingly, if …主要解决方法 there are more financial investment in
infrastructure
facilities and restrictions on the use of private cars, I am convinced that ___the
traffic will be significantly improved.
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