2024年1月4日发(作者：49寸液晶电视尺寸)

　　重点单词

　　excessively

　　quality

　　conceivable

　　单词conceivable 联想记忆：

　　conceive设想，想象+able表形容词，“可…的，能…”→想象得出的

　　symbol

　　单词symbol 联想记忆：

　　sym共同＋bol抛→共同抛出的标志→符号，象征

　　variety

　　extent

　　单词extent 联想记忆：

　　ex出+tent伸展→伸出去的[范围]→范围；程度

　　excessive

　　harmonious

　　单词harmonious 联想记忆：

　　harmony（n 协调；融洽）

　　consideration

　　concentrate

　　单词concentrate 联想记忆：

　　con共同，centra＝center中心：共同向中心－集中。

　　On Excessive Packaging

　　Nowadays the phenomena of excessive packaging of goods are prevailing in our society:

clothes swathed in tissue paper, placed in cardboard box and finally wrapped in well—designed

plastic bags, imported bottles of grape wine packed in wooden boxes, fruits put in hand-woven

baskets, to name but a few.

　　There are several causes of excessive packaging. The first reason is that a large number of

companies believe that they can attract customers' attention and stimulate their purchasing

desire by over—packaging their goods, thus gaining more profits. On the other hand, quite a

number of consumers mistakenly hold that the more delicate the package is, the better the

quality will be, thus encouraging excessive packaging.

　　In my point of view, excessive packaging has disastrous consequences, including the loss of

precious resources, excessive consumption of water and energy, and unnecessary extraction of

scarce land for landfill.

　　To solve the problem, it's necessary to take the following measures. First, laws and

regulations must be made to restrict excessive packaging of companies. In addition, we need to

raise consumer's awareness that excessive packaging doesn't equal to high quality and advocate

packaging recycling.

　　【解析】

　　本次作文的话题是“过度包装”，话题不断新，考生应该都比较熟悉。写好本篇作文的关键在于紧跟题目所列提纲：现象——原因——看法和建议，确定相应的写作结构。重点分析产生此现象的原因有哪些，把最重要的两三点罗列下来。最后，根据分析出的原因提供相应的建议。

　　范文首段开门见山，首先一句话总结如今社会上过度包装现象盛行，而后举出一些实例补充说明。

　　第二段重点从公司和消费者两方面论述产生过度包装的原因。公司方面是为了吸引顾客，刺激消费，赢取更多的利润；消费者方面是认为包装越精美，质量越好这种错误的消费意识。

　　接下来作者表明自己的看法，认为过度包装会导致很多问题：稀缺资源的流失；水，能源的过度消耗以及产生不必要的垃圾场等。

　　最后一段作者针对原因提出了一些解决方案。第一方面，建立法律规章制度来约束企业的过度包装行为。第二方面，必须让消费者认识到过度包装不等同于高质量，并提倡包装物的回收利用。

　　本文条理清晰，论述充分，语言使用规范得当，如：to name but a few，the first

reason is that…，on the other hand，in my point of view，to solve the problem，first，in

addition等。

　　来源:可可英语

　　On Excessive Packaging

　　Wandering at the supermarkets, you could find that the shelves are fulfilled with fancy and

excessive packaging goods with high price, especially when festivals approach. Although the

government has concerned with that issue, the phenomena still flourishes.

　　The reasons can be listed as follows. First, manufactures could benefit from the fancy

packaging. Glorious packaging would increase the price to a large extent, from which they can

gain excessive money. Second, most of this kind of goods are brought and sent as gifts to their

relatives and leaders. Gorgeous packaging would attract people’s attention and make the people

who buy them have the honor to send them out.

　　To my mind, excessive packaging is just a waste of resources and money. Most people

would throw the package away after they opened it, which would lead to a severe pollution. To

prevent the situation, every citizen should be aware of the problem and laws must be made to

restrict the manufactures to cut down on luxurious packaging.

　　【解析】

　　本次写作延续了传统的出题方式，即英文题目+ 中文解析，但同时也继续了去年的一点小改动，对字数作了明确的限定。对于考生而言，商品过度包装本身已是日常生活的热点话题，大家比较熟悉，能有较多发挥空间。

　　在写作过程当中，最重要的是要理清思路，将文章的逻辑关系理清。范文中，作者第一段描述了这一现象；第二段中，开篇便点出了主题，一目了然，列出了出现这一现象的原因；最后一段里，作者发表总结了自己的一些观点。全文条理较为清晰。

　　其次，在句型方面，建议考生使用长短句交错的方式，这样节奏便较为明朗。

　　最后，用词方面，文章对“过度包装”使用了多种表达方式，如fancy packaging,

luxurious packaging, glorious packaging等等。这样文章便不会显得“干燥”，让阅卷老师怀疑你的词汇量。因此，同学们在平时一定要注意同义词、词组的替换和使用。

　　来源:可可英语